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Post by shartteredheart95 on Apr 8, 2009 21:17:56 GMT -5
Name: Razuel Gender: Female Age: 22 Apperence: Personality: she's very outgoing and loves to have fun! she hates preps and anima hunters and is very tomboy-ish. she is incredably smart and when she was in grade school she dedicated her whole life to school. she also loves to meet new people! she likes to see what different personalities people have and is surprised by which personalities she is attracted to. all of her friends and tease her and say that if they could bottle up her energy, they all would be rich, due to her infinate amount of energy (duh!) Anima part: doesn't have one, she's human Background: Lost both parents to +Anima's at age 1 1/2. she doesn't remember a thing. She still tries to give +Anima's a chance because she wasn't there when it happened and she doesn't know the reason on they killed er parents. she tries to keep an open mind. she now lives with her grandparents, but mainly travels around looking for money, seeing the world and helping +anima's escape. one of her deepest secrets is that she really travels to try to see if she can find out why her parents were killed. she won't tell her grandparents because they would be super worried about her, and she never tells her friends because well... she likes to keep to herself. Weapons: doesn't carry one with her but she can fight as long as there's always a good stick around! Do people fear you: only if their dumb enough to piss her off. Family: Grandparents, but she is a traveler. Crush: NA How you get your +Anima part: she's human
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Post by Alissa on Apr 8, 2009 23:47:10 GMT -5
Ok I see a few problems... 1) In your subject tittle, it should be 'Razel (Travler)' to show that she is human and not a +Anima.
2) Her personality shouldnt be in list form, but paragraph form, and alot longer.
3)For her background, I would appritate it if you added alot more to it.
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Post by shartteredheart95 on Apr 21, 2009 15:30:50 GMT -5
kk ^^ sry bout that! i'll fix it
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